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Is this fine ? "THE GLORY OF OUR GREAT GOD"?
He is the King of Kings and the Lord of Lords
Crowned with glory and Majesty
He Who is and Who was
And Who is to come, the Almighty
Clothed with a garment down to the feet
He stands in the midst of the seven lampstands
One like the Son of Man,
Girded about the chest with a golden band
His eyes shine like the flames of fire
His head and hair as white as snow
His voice as the sound of the roaring oceans
His feet like fine brass, we never know
He holds in His right hand the seven stars
Great and Mighty is His appearance
Out of His mouth comes a sharp two edged sword
Like the sun shining in its strength, is His countenance
Salvation belongs to our God who sits on the throne,
To the Lamb and to Him Who is Holy
Blessing, thanksgiving and honor, all power and might,
To Him be all the praise and all glory.
yes, its my writing. I have taken the book of revelation as reference.
Thanks.
I like it but here are a few things you might add or change are in "word" and meaning of words and misfittings are in (word).
Clothed with a garment of "scarlet" down to the feet
(In the Bible the seven lamp-stands are seven churches)
One like the Son of Man, (Doesn't fit with what the lamp-stands mean)
(As long as there is a two edged sword, it means that while God tends to the evil with pain, He also gives Marcy.)
To Him be all the "Praise and all Glory."
These are the few things that I would change, add or rewrite, due to meaning. Other that that, it is GREAT!